Destroy the image of the girl,
Who was so perfect, with her pearls.
Throw away the dream of light,
And hold close to you, the deep, dark night.
Obliterate the picture of health,
In other words, all your wealth.
Throw away all your fears,
And hold close to you, your gloomy tears.
Annihilate the vision of bliss,
Which was so fake, enter abyss.
Throw away all your hard work,
And hold close to you the void, no perks.
Eliminate everything as I die,
Let me enter the endless void, say goodbye.
Throw me into an endless chasm of something,And hold close to you, a memory of nothing.
Who was so perfect, with her pearls.
Throw away the dream of light,
And hold close to you, the deep, dark night.
Obliterate the picture of health,
In other words, all your wealth.
Throw away all your fears,
And hold close to you, your gloomy tears.
Annihilate the vision of bliss,
Which was so fake, enter abyss.
Throw away all your hard work,
And hold close to you the void, no perks.
Eliminate everything as I die,
Let me enter the endless void, say goodbye.
Throw me into an endless chasm of something,And hold close to you, a memory of nothing.
By ~~~Forest Nymph~~~
13 comments:
i have pearls...wats wrong with pearls...i like my pearls
whoa another kick assed poem!! you rock!!
helllooooo wats wrong with pearls?!?!?!?!?
umm.... as pearls get older they eventually rot. and they cost quite a lot for little round shiny balls. there you go math.
uhhhh noooo they dont, they dont rot, mums got heaps and they havent rotted...at least i dont think they have, besides mine werent that expensieve
c'mon don't get whiny about pearls now. its not the main point right? if she dosent like pearls then too bad for you mon.
Math>>> i was using pearls as a metaphor. I meant pearls as a thing to make oneself look better... (or possibly worse)
jeremy( life is pain)>>> why thankyou! Sorry i didn't comment on your blog, I tried to but couldn't figure out how to get into the comment part thing-a-mah-jig. But the poems I read (the first 2) were pretty good too. One thing tho, sometimes it's best to have continuity in things (a.k.a poems) to set a rythm and keep things in order, such as what lines rhyme and so on. Thats the only thing I have to say apart from... AWESOME DUDE!!!!!!!!
haha thanks. where are you from by the way? i'm from singapore and i'm currently stdying for my o levels. my command of english is not that high yet. and my poetry level is nothing compared to yours. keep it up!=) well hope to do a poem with you someday. add msn?
jeremy(life is pain)>>> I'm from Australia. I do hav msn but I dont want to put it onto the blog in case a computer hacker gets into it or somthing...
aus? wow. my sister is working in aus
in melbourne. for some no profit organization thingy well then why dont u add me =) jerem_teo_1@hotmail.com =) hahaha
jeremy_teo_1@hotmail.com ***
cool poem.
watch out for those hackers. they prey on bloggers.
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